7-8-13 Massive Damage Part 3: Super

Massive Damage

Part 3: Super

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Robin

Steve Steele's spell is a pretty big creeper spell. It could be very bad for people if Steele really knew how to use it and make it evolve. I mean, Eric's done so much with his spell already to make it evolve to where it is, that Steele should be even better considering he had his spell much longer than Eric. But whatever, right?

7-5-13 Massive Damage Part 3: Super

Massive Damage

Part 3: Super

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7-3-13 Massive Damage Part 3: Super

Massive Damage 

Part 3: Super

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The spell doesn't work

Commentary time! It's strange getting back into this. I only took like a 2 month break from this. Yeah, so Steele recognizes Erica from his party that one time. Mind, you it wasn't Erica... On another note, if you haven't noticed, (I'm mentioning this again) but there's a lot of characters that I've sort of re-vampted in terms of art style and the way they look. A notable example of this will come later with another character. But, as for Steele, I think his look has changed a lot. Back when I first created the character, he looked really sloppy. But now he looks less sloppy! :D Hurray for learning!

7-1-13 Massive Damage Part 3: Super

Massive Damage

Part 3: Super

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Steve Steele and a horribly drawn ruining of relationship

So, I haven't done a commentary in a while. I feel like this is as good a time as ever to return to the commentary. I wanted to touch on a couple things. First of all, the flashback sequence of Brandon and Lecoeur. Before I do the arc for the story, I map it all out. It'll be like, this is what I want to do and how I want it to go. That flashback sequence wasn't in my map, but I feel like it was necessary. I wanted to do something that I haven't done with any of my characters until this arc, give my characters a reason to like them and a reason to care about them. I feel like the flashback of Brandon gave Brandon a motivation to be. That's why he's there, to find the cure and meet up with Lecoeur. Speaking of Lecoeur, I want to be the first to say this, but at some point, he'll make a return, and I think I've made that set up clear. I don't exactly know when, but he'll be back. Other than that, I've got nothing else to talk about. So...Let it be known that the commentary has returned!

9-11-12 High School Party Part 2: Admire The Tower

High School Party

Part 2: Admire The Tower

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Top left of the page is bent and held down by my pencil...FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU---

Ruins the illusion doesn't it. If you're having trouble reading the top of the page, just zoom in. Now I'm going to slam my head against a wall out of sheer anger.

9-10-12 High School Party Part 2: Admire The Tower

High School Party

Part 2: Admire The Tower

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Here's a little behind the scenes, fun fact for you. When I originally mapped out HSP, I never had this scene in my map (Along with other scenes). That's exactly why I don't immediately script it out. I'll map it first so i have a general idea, then the day of that page I'll think to myself "Okay, I have to progress the story and put this in here, but here's a good place for this gag I just thought of." The only reason I don't write my jokes in advance is because later on, I'll either come up with something I think is better, or I just won't think it's funny anymore. Anyway, so the reason why I included this scene at last minute was for 4 major reasons. 1: I wanted to include a bit more of Steve Steele and show how much of a jerk he could be. 2: I wanted to prove that Steele DOES have magic and Robin wasn't lying. 3: To show that Steele's spell doesn't affect Eric because technically he's not a real girl (We'll get a bit more into that later). and 4: I can't say yet. This comes later.

8-27-12 High School Party Part 2: Admire The Tower

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I have really nothing else written as for Steve Steele. I feel like he should be better established as a secondary antagonist. We haven't really seem much of Steve Steele, and yet we haven't seen the last of him either.

8-26-12 High School Party Part 2: Admire The Tower

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I bet you didn't see that coming. What a twist!

8-9-12 High School Party Part 2: Admire The Tower

 

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Part 2: Admire The Tower

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If you haven't noticed, Liz went back to her old attire. For some reason, I just don't think she looks good in black.

7-24-12 High School Party Part 1: Stack The Blocks

High School Party

Part 1: Stack The Blocks

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Late uploads are always bad. In my defense I was out all day and swarmed with paperwork. Anyway, we finally get closer and deeper into story. The party has finally been talked about and we're getting more of a clue as to the details. As for Steve Steele, he did this....

Mind the horrible art, this drawing is from before Clone Arc. But yeah, that jerk stole Robin from Kevin, so Kevin has bad blood against him.