Showing posts with label Joel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Joel. Show all posts

11/15/13

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10/14/13

10-14-13 Massive Damage Part 5: Changes


Massive Damage
Part 5: Changes

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I apologize for not posting on Friday. I've been having problems with Blogger all weekend, and I've sort of figured some things out, but other things are still screwy. Please bare with me.

10/7/13

10-7-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm
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I dun goofed on Friday. Those of you who realized it before I changed it, saw the title for Wednesday's start to Part 5. I'm sorry for the confusion, this is the last page of part 4. I'm not going crazy, I'm just stupid.

10/4/13

10-4-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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I love killing off the main character.

10/2/13

10-2-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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9/30/13

9-30-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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9/20/13

9-20-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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The thing I like about Mary is the fact that she always has other people do things for her. For example, she was told to call Joel's Dad, but instead, it's revealed by Liz that she decided to follow Eric and Joel's fight. It's implied that she told Liz to call Joel's Dad for her, so she can follow the fight, and avoid the conflict of talking to Mr. Heyworth or getting involved in Kevin's fight with the rock monsters (which is still going on at this point). I think that's a very intriguing quality that Mary has. It may come into play later.

9/16/13

9-16-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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Just to clarify... That's not Joel's dad in the car. It's just a random guy driving home from work. Nothing more, nothing less.

9/13/13

9-13-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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9/11/13

9-11-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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The Rock Monsters look a lot better than the last time we saw them. They're more chiseled now! Get it? Because they're stone... 

9/6/13

9-6-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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9/4/13

9-4-13 Massive Damage Part 4: The Storm


Massive Damage
Part 4: The Storm

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5/22/13

5-22-13 Massive Damage Part 2: Down


Massive Damage
Part 2: Down

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How do ya like my crappy school bell. Yeah, I got a bit lazy with that...

5/20/13

5-20-13 Massive Damage Part 2: Down


Massive Damage
Part 2: Down

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I should probably address why I haven't written an actual commentary in like forever. The simple reason is that I don't want to spoil things in the story. I have a tendency to accidentally ruin something subtly. So, in order to ensure that nothing like that happens, I've sort of abstained from commentating. Plus, I have nothing to talk about sometimes. That's a reason, right? I can't just write about nothing. There needs to be something to peak my interest while writing, and I feel like if I just go off about a random topic, then it'll be annoying to some.